Holiday

Jan 4, 2016 17:26
Today, I was playing with my nephew and niece at a park.

Since both of them were very energetic, I was fun but also tired.

Then I went to shopping for such as suits for job interviews with my mother.

I was going to pay the price for the suit, but my mother paid and presented it to me as New Year's gift.

I appreciate it very much.

Today's dinner is yakiniku (roasted meat).

I'm looking forward to eating yakiniku.
休日

今日は甥っ子と姪っ子と公園で遊びました。

二人共すごく元気で、楽しかったですがとても疲れました。

そして母親と一緒に、面接用のスーツなどの買い物に行きました。

スーツ代は支払うつもりでしたが、母親がお年玉ということで支払ってくれました。

とても感謝しています。

今日の夕飯は焼き肉です。

楽しみです。
No. 1　skudge's correction
  • Holiday
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Today, I was playing with my nephew and niece at a park.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Since both of them were very energetic, I was fun but also tired.
  • Since both of them were very energetic, it was fun but also tiring.
  • Then I went to shopping for such as suits for job interviews with my mother.
  • Then I went to shopping with my mother for things such as suits for job interviews.
  • I was going to pay the price for the suit, but my mother paid and presented it to me as New Year's gift.
  • I was going to pay the price for the suit, but my mother paid and presented it to me as a New Year's gift.
  • I appreciate it very much.
  • I appreciated it very much.
    　Even though in Japanese this sentence would use present tense, for English, we use past tense for "appreciated" because the thing you are appreciating has passed already.
  • Today's dinner is yakiniku (roasted meat).
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I'm looking forward to eating yakiniku.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
No. 2　デクラン's correction
  • Holiday
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Today, I was playing with my nephew and niece at a park.
  • Today, I was playing with my nephew and niece at the park.
  • Since both of them were very energetic, I was fun but also tired.
  • Since both of them were very energetic, it was fun but also tiring.
  • Then I went to shopping for such as suits for job interviews with my mother.
  • Then I went to shopping for such as suits for job interviews with my mother.
  • I was going to pay the price for the suit, but my mother paid and presented it to me as New Year's gift.
  • I was going to pay the price of the suit, but my mother paid instead and presented it to me as New Year's gift.
  • I appreciate it very much.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Today's dinner is yakiniku (roasted meat).
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I'm looking forward to eating yakiniku.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
焼肉、いいですね。美味しかったですか？
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post!
美味しかったです(^-^)
No. 3　Timmy's correction
  • Since both of them were very energetic, I was fun but also tired.
  • Since both of them were very energetic, I was fun but also tiresome.
  • I'm looking forward to eating yakiniku.
  • I'm looking forward to eating yakiniku (or: it).
Nice! Nothing compares with a few free moments that you can spend with your family.
kanotown
Thank you so much always for correcting my post! :)
Yes, I want to cherish such a precious moment.
Timmy
You're welcome!^_^
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